How Do You Write A Positive Comment?

In the afternoon we had to write a post of what we learnt today. Here's what I want to say about that.

Today Whaea Tania came into our classroom and taught us how to write a great and positive comment. So we watched a video about coloring someones else's canvas. After watching the video Whaea Tania got out some ice block sticks with all of the classrooms names on them. She put them in a kete and we were to pick one out. Who ever's names that were on the stick, we had to write a comment on there blog to color there canvas. So the person I wrote to was Iverson.

Here's what I wrote to Iverson:

Hi Iverson, it's Zephaniah here. I like the way how you explained what you did on learning how to code. One nice thing I heard in your post was that you helped others how to work and Finnish all the levels. I also like the way you screenshotted your certificate and a photo to show what you've been doing. Maybe next time you could add more sense to what your explaining in the text for example, the punctuation and putting it all together so it all can make sense well it's in one paragraph. But overall, great DLO on learning how to code. Blog You Later!

What I learnt today about coloring someone else's canvas, is that when commenting on someone else's blog, it will brighten there day by coloring there canvas. 

My Writing Goal

A Day In Town - Recount

WALT organise and follow the structure of a recount

                                A Day In Town

Last week on Tuesday was my luckiest day ever. Many good things were coming toward
me. My brother, sisters, Nan and I went out shopping. Did I also mention that it was
my sisters birthday? I told you many great things were coming.

On a fine Tuesday morning, I woke up and planned to go out shopping. I got changed

and went to the bathroom and washed my sleepy face. After that I went in the kitchen
and got myself some breakfast. Later on, we headed off to town. Because it was my
sisters birthday, we went to the Warehouse. We all got money and bought whatever
we wanted. While I was in the lane where the lollies were, I thought my sister was
next beside me and said to her. “What should I get”. In a joyful way. But how poor
of me, it was not even her. It was just someone I never meet before when I thought
it was my sister.

Minuets go buy and we went to the supermarket and also got some things we wanted

along with some groceries. Lane by lane we look for many delicious things. It feels like
we're obsessed with a lot of junk food. The following time, we  went home and had a
rest for the time bean. When we got home my breakfast has already settled in and I
immediately snuck and spooned a big potion of Milo into my mouth. Delightful.

The day ends with a mouth watering birthday cake. “Happy birthday”. As I say to

my sister. So I past my other day’s lying down, being lazy and being served like a king.
That wasn't really a bad ending and starting the day off wasn’t it? But what a
marvelous day being the luckiest kid on this earth.

Stop Motion

Today Whaea Tania came into our class again and this time we done something called stop motion. This is a app is a helpful thing to use when wanting to do animation. We all worked in partners. I have worked with my friend Ricci. We also used play-dough to help us with this kind of animation. It was an awesome fist time doing this animation app.

                                                               This is our first attempt:

Hour Of Coding

Kia-ora everyone, welcome back to my blog. Today Whaea Tania cam into our class for cyber smart learning. Today we have learnt about coding again. We have done another hour of coding game. As I have all ready mentioned it before on my last post, this game was very awesome. But what I haven't mentioned before was you trying it out for yourself. This game was amazing, but different, this time we done another topic which was "star wars coding".

Here I have some images to show you what I have done with this game:

Quit Smoking - Speech

Kia-ora everyone,  I would like to share to you my recording of myself about my speech that explains why you should quit smoking. What I found hard about this topic of writing a speech was thinking some ideas of why people should smoke. I was successful by recording myself of my speech that may persuade people to give up smoking. Now is the time to watch this creative video about why people should quit smoking.

- Enjoy

What Is A Pepeha?

Kia-ora everyone, today I am showing you a slide about what a pepha is. In these slides you may see how a pepeha is used and what a pepeha is. I hope you enjoy this presentation about a pepeha.