GARDEN JOURNEY!!!
I was like surrounded by many beautiful gardens from all around the world. Wait, let's go back to the beginning. So me and my family went to go to the gardens called the hamilton gardens, and yes it’s in Hamilton. As we drove to hamilton gardens it was pouring down with rain and it was so horrible. We arrived and I jumped out with excitement and I couldn’t wait but the worst thing for me was the rain. As it was pouring down with rain we had to go under the shelter which was the toilet and wait there for like one thousand years, just joking it was like fifteen minutes. Well a few more minutes went by, the rain stopped and we had some lunch, after that we went around the gardens.
As we walked through we saw the most beautiful plants we have ever seen before, even though we have been there before but that was like seven years ago. (For me it was.) Tweet, tweet, tweet, the birds are singing as we were walking through the most loveliest gardens ever. I smelt the delicious and the most tremendous smell of all flowers. There I was, standing near a cage in the kitchen garden when I thought it was a box but actually it was cage, it was a scary and the most ugliest thing ever. There was a noise. “Aahhh. What is it?” Wait it’s a few chickens. That was an embarrassing fright. I was chicken of the chicken, haha. So we kept going until we finished the whole entire gardens. Wait, what am I thinking, we only went around like a couple or more gardens.
A few minutes went by and we went through a couple more gardens so we can go home. My favorite garden was the italian garden because there was heaps of water and there was water fountains. When we were by the water my brother Zion, was pretending to put his face in the water and I sneakily went up to him and put his face in the water by pushing it down. But don't worry I only pushed it down quickly, only if you thought I drowned him but I didn't. That was so hilarious, you should've seen his face. It was so funny. Even my parents laughed. So after three hours we went home and that was so fun as we were walking through the gardens.
I will never forget that day having so much fun with my family and seeing all the beautiful gardens from other places. Also I wouldn't forget that hilarious dun kin water that I did to my brother’s face and I won't forget that I was so embarrassed when I saw those chickens when I thought it was just a box. I will never and never and never forget that time.
Hi Zephaniah it's Saskia from Room Hauraki and I loved reading your writing because it really hooked me in. I also think you could work on your grammar more, it really made me think of the time I had a play where the were going to mini golf and the started get weird texts from their grandma say stuff like she paid $250,000 to get a horse painted blue!!They ended up in a garden centre, which is why reminded me of it.If you want to follow my learning check out my blog at http://wpssaskiac.blogspot.co.nz/
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