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All I remember was crawling out of bed and making myself some
breakfast. WAIT! I recall my story. I flocked out of bed and
again, made me some breakfast.  I wake up in a smearing face.
Slowly I walk through the hallway, go into the room and get
changed. Appearingly, my sister came flowing fast into the room
and said. “We're going to leap”. I froze there with excitement.
So we left, bringing along my brothers, sisters and parents.

Accordingly, we then got into the car and drove down  to leap.
A great trampoline place where you can hop, hop were ever you
want and whenever you want if your there. Amazing right?
We fetched in the building, then done some business to get in
and frolic. We overlapped people to get in the trampoline area.
As I march in, I was wondering what I should do first. Maybe
I should do basketball, no, let’s go on the tramp park. Uhh, there
are so many options. I then found one. Every family member of
min went into the dodgeball area. I grab a ball and throw it at
someone and it was so hilarious, then continued on. Altogether
We then went go into other areas of entertainments. It was a blast!

So we finished up and went home. That day, was an amazing
and thrilling time even when spending time with my family.
So that day forth will now be a memorable memory that will last
long In lifetime.