It was midnight, the start of a brand new day. I woke up as well as the
others. We all got ready for this adventurous trip. Do you want to know
where we went? Well, I want you to think for yourself. So all of us were
ready and headed off to the Auckland International Airport. You may be
thinking, ‘oh there going overseas’. Well, your right. Anyways, we all went
through all the capacity ways to get on the plane to a different country and
headed onto the aircraft. So we went, across the Pacific Ocean and to the
country. It was a four hour flight and it was tiring.
others. We all got ready for this adventurous trip. Do you want to know
where we went? Well, I want you to think for yourself. So all of us were
ready and headed off to the Auckland International Airport. You may be
thinking, ‘oh there going overseas’. Well, your right. Anyways, we all went
through all the capacity ways to get on the plane to a different country and
headed onto the aircraft. So we went, across the Pacific Ocean and to the
country. It was a four hour flight and it was tiring.
We arrived and it was scorching hot and everyone almost fainted. Once
again, we went through the rest of the capacity ways to get through to
the otherside. Finally we went through and after that exhausting flight,
we went to our uncle's house and had a feed. I don’t want to make you wait
any longer to guess which country we went to so, the country we went to
was AUSTRALIA!
again, we went through the rest of the capacity ways to get through to
the otherside. Finally we went through and after that exhausting flight,
we went to our uncle's house and had a feed. I don’t want to make you wait
any longer to guess which country we went to so, the country we went to
was AUSTRALIA!
The part of Australia we went to was Brisbone where all the theme parks
are. It might be a common country that everyone knows but it’s actually
a nice place. The city was humongous and it was worth going to. We had
the whole day to do some things and have a clear look of Brisborne. Night
had arrived and slowly we all went to sleep.
are. It might be a common country that everyone knows but it’s actually
a nice place. The city was humongous and it was worth going to. We had
the whole day to do some things and have a clear look of Brisborne. Night
had arrived and slowly we all went to sleep.
Amusingly, I woke up the whole house to quickly get ready to go to the
first theme park. The theme park we went to was Movie World. We finally
reached our destination at Movie World and I was full of cheerfulness.
We entered through the gates and I felt lucky because not everyone can
go to parks like these in Australia. However, you could clearly see all the
mountain top roller coasters and all the amazing looking shops there.
first theme park. The theme park we went to was Movie World. We finally
reached our destination at Movie World and I was full of cheerfulness.
We entered through the gates and I felt lucky because not everyone can
go to parks like these in Australia. However, you could clearly see all the
mountain top roller coasters and all the amazing looking shops there.
I went on the scariest ride there with my sister and you should see how
scared I was before we even went on it. Tears almost ran down my cheeks. Feeling terrified, I actually took that chance and went on the ride. Slowly
we went up, and I rapidly closed my eyes tight and held on the bars firmly.
It was scary! The roller coaster started and my sister and I were yelling
hard out until our breaths were gone. It was bumby, I kept going side to
side, leaning forward and the wind kept pushing me back. During the ride,
like half way through it, it started to be chilling. I really enjoyed that
ride except the beginning.
scared I was before we even went on it. Tears almost ran down my cheeks. Feeling terrified, I actually took that chance and went on the ride. Slowly
we went up, and I rapidly closed my eyes tight and held on the bars firmly.
It was scary! The roller coaster started and my sister and I were yelling
hard out until our breaths were gone. It was bumby, I kept going side to
side, leaning forward and the wind kept pushing me back. During the ride,
like half way through it, it started to be chilling. I really enjoyed that
ride except the beginning.
After that, we then headed onto other rides and went into awesome
shops. I brought some amazing souvenirs and went on the scariest
frightening rides. A few hours then, we had something to eat and headed
off back to the house before dark.
shops. I brought some amazing souvenirs and went on the scariest
frightening rides. A few hours then, we had something to eat and headed
off back to the house before dark.
That day wasn’t even the start, we had more enjoyment coming towards
us but that trip was the best out of all of them. It was a joyful time to
spend with the family and to be able to go to those theme parks. So from
that day forward, I will never forget that most memorable time is
AUSTRALIA!
us but that trip was the best out of all of them. It was a joyful time to
spend with the family and to be able to go to those theme parks. So from
that day forward, I will never forget that most memorable time is
AUSTRALIA!
Hello Zephaniah, my names Malia and I'm a year 9 student at Bay of Islands College. I really like how you have written this, it was interesting to read. That theme park sounded like it was fun. There are a couple of spelling errors that you could fix up but otherwise this is a good piece of writing. Which theme park ride was your favourite?
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