Holiday

This is my holiday recount. I have tried to proof-read my own writing
Christchurch Trip

I had the most amazing holiday, going to Christchurch. As we traveled to Christchurch I was really excited. We arrived, as we went through the gate. It was mind blowing. We just walked inside, my aunties were coming outside to open the door for us, and they looked different as well. We gave them a hug then the adults sat down and us kids played outside. Then a car came, we went in the front to have a look who it was and it was my uncle and my cousins, we played together then we had some kai.

We woke up it was a beautiful morning, we had breakfast then we went out for a drive and we saw my old family's home and it was busted down. and most of the other houses were busted down as well, that was very sad. After seeing that we had a swim, it was called the whale pool, the pool looked fun so we went in and we saw a fake large whale and I thought “so that’s why it’s called the whale pool”. That was so fun, a few minutes later we went back to my aunt's house then stayed there till it was night then go to sleep then wait for the next day.

So we woke up again and it was a much better morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. We had some breakfast then we went out again. We went to go to a place called cookie time, it was a place where all the cookie times are, in the old days 1983 you get to pay one dollar to go in and you can eat whatever you want, but that didn't happen to us because now it’s a shop but it was still fun. After that we went back to my aunt's then had a play and have a sleep. That’s all I have to say because it’s going to be a long story.The End

I was really happy and that was my first time in Christchurch but I was really happy when I saw my family even the family I haven't seen for years but it was a little sad when we went back home.