What Do You Do With Your Rubbish?

W.A.L.T group similar ideas into paragraphs.

I strongly suggest that we shouldn't throw our rubbish in the landfill. Only a few people care and the rest are a bit odd. We don't want to throw everything in the landfill. Is this what everyone wants? Well I don't.

One reason we should not put all our rubbish into landfills because the rubbish could end up finding its way to the Pacific Ocean. In the Pacific Ocean there is a magnificent patch of garbage called the trash vortex. Many animals are dieing because of that. Along with other waste that  swirls slowly around like a clock, there's dead fish, marine mammals, and birds who get snared. Some people think its alright to throw their rubbish anywhere they want. If it's you, you should be ashamed of yourself because do you know what you're doing? I suggest that we have to make our world workable, clean and so we can have pure water.

Another thing we can do instead of throwing it away is we can recycle many things like paper, cardboard, aluminium cans, glass and many more. The more we recycle the less rubbish we put in the landfill. How can we stop making the landfill getting larger and larger? And how can we stop this from happening? I know, we can remind each other and tell them to not throw their rubbish for example lets say “hey you forgot to recycle your rubbish” because we're not going to do it for them they need to self manage their self.

In summary I think we should recycle not throw it in the landfill or take it to the dump because you know we got options but we need to self manage our self because your not hurting our community but let’s make a change for once in our lives and so we can make our world a better place.

I have been learning to put ideas in each paragraph and to use detail. What I found hard is rereading my work and to add more punctuation. My next step is to plan my ideas with out the teacher.