Frantic Sports

I am learning to write simple, simple, compound and complex sentences.

This is my writing assessment. I have tried to interdependently improve my sentences. I am looking to check that they make sense. I am checking my punctuation.

What I found hard about my writing is highlighting my simple, compound and complex sentences and which ones which. What I learnt is using great emotive words and using good structure and doing good sentences.

Frantic Sports

I think that sports is more important than music. Agree or disagree? There are more things you can do than music. There are heaps of different kinds of sports you can play such as soccer, hockey, rippa rugby, rugby and more.

My first reason why sports is more important than music is because it gives you heaps of energy. This can make you a great sportsman. Added to this, the most important thing about is it makes you lose weight. People may like music more than sports but in my opinion, I think that sports is more important.

My second reason why sports is more important than music is because it can help you get involved at representing your country and your family. Imagine if it were you who was a sports player for your country, how would you feel? Great right?

Another reason is that, it can make you fit and healthy. For example, you can learn and learn to play a sport, and then you won't have to worry about your weight and your body condition. If then, you will become a different person. Don't you want this? Well, I think you should. It’s appalling that most people don't even play sports, isn't it? Music may be a popular thing in life, but I think that sports can be too. In other words, sports is more important than music because of how it gives you a good education.

My last reason why I think that sports is more important than music is, like I said, it can give you a good education in life. For example, you can do lots and lots of sports and you will get a good education. In other words, when playing a sport, you can go to different countries. You probably think i’m stupid, but i’m not, because look at yourself. What do you think you should do? Sports, of course. Music, music music music, again it may be a popular thing. It may be a good thing or a bad thing, you might actually not have the answer for that question, right? You probably will. Sometimes I like singing as well but the best better thing in my life is sports.

In conclusion, I think that sports is more important than music. What do you think? This gives you heaps of energy and it can make you fit and healthy.  Also, it will give you a great education.