Wow what a beautiful short story you have written, you really keep the reader interested so thank you for this. Acid rain sounds really harmful for our environment. Did you know that Acid rain comes in wet and dry forms? Wet forms are mostly mixed with rain, snow, fog or hail. That is so kind that you are thinking about the animals and bringing them in to offer them shelter and help. Animals don’t often have the ability to look after themselves, therefore sometimes they do need help.
I really like the way you explained how you felt, describing the feeling of being ‘heartbroken’. It paints a picture for us the readers and make us think about how we would react in this situation. What do you think the animals be feeling? If they could talk, what would they be saying?
I am really enjoying reading your blog posts again Zephaniah! And congratulations for finishing the Summer Learning Journey, It has been such a pleasure seeing you on board. Don’t forget that you can get extra points by posting meaningful, thoughtful and positive comments on any other bloggers post!
MÅrena Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteWow what a beautiful short story you have written, you really keep the reader interested so thank you for this. Acid rain sounds really harmful for our environment. Did you know that Acid rain comes in wet and dry forms? Wet forms are mostly mixed with rain, snow, fog or hail.
That is so kind that you are thinking about the animals and bringing them in to offer them shelter and help. Animals don’t often have the ability to look after themselves, therefore sometimes they do need help.
I really like the way you explained how you felt, describing the feeling of being ‘heartbroken’. It paints a picture for us the readers and make us think about how we would react in this situation. What do you think the animals be feeling? If they could talk, what would they be saying?
I am really enjoying reading your blog posts again Zephaniah! And congratulations for finishing the Summer Learning Journey, It has been such a pleasure seeing you on board. Don’t forget that you can get extra points by posting meaningful, thoughtful and positive comments on any other bloggers post!
Blog you later!
Georgia E