In todays presentation I will be writing a poen explaining my experince in Beijing. I had so much fun doing this on a google drawing. Here is my work and I hope you enjoy!
Well done for writing a poem that rhymes. I think I would struggle to create a poem that rhymes. I can tell from reading your poem that you are unhappy with the smog that is created by factories in Beijing. I can feel your passion for saving the environment coming through as well. We are very lucky here in New Zealand to not have the smog issues that places like China have. Although we don’t know what is going to happen in the future so it is important for New Zealand to take steps to reducing their carbon footprint so we can continue to live in clean, green New Zealand. Can you think of any ways an average New Zealander can help reduce their carbon footprint?
Kia Ora Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing a poem that rhymes. I think I would struggle to create a poem that rhymes. I can tell from reading your poem that you are unhappy with the smog that is created by factories in Beijing. I can feel your passion for saving the environment coming through as well. We are very lucky here in New Zealand to not have the smog issues that places like China have. Although we don’t know what is going to happen in the future so it is important for New Zealand to take steps to reducing their carbon footprint so we can continue to live in clean, green New Zealand. Can you think of any ways an average New Zealander can help reduce their carbon footprint?
Blog ya later,
Dani