My poem is about how I would felt if I landed safely in Christchurch from such a long trip
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For the high and lows and moment between
Mountains and valleys with rivers and streams
For where you are now and for where you will go
For I've always known and I told you so
For nothing that is happening and all has gone wrong
It's here in this journey you will learn to be strong
You will get where you're going and find where you belong
Thank you for reading my poem!
Kia Ora Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome poem you have written! I love how many rhyming words you've used. Have you ever been to Christchurch? I went for a school trip when I was at High School, not long after the earthquake and it was very sad to see how much damage had been done to a beautiful city.
Nga mihi
Georgia
Kia Ora Zephaniah
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jolie and I go to Glen Innes School,I am also doing the summer Learning Journey which means that I can see more of your amazing work. I love your work. What was your favourite part about this activity? Why?. Keep up the great work.
Kia Ora Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteWow that's an amazing poem! I really like how the poem flows. Have you written many poems before?
Keep up the good work :)
-Dani