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Setting Sail
In an amazing place, as I strolled through the sea to go to a place called New Zealand. Just joking. Hi Maui, today i’ll be talking about how i’ll feel about setting sail and going across the sea to come to NZ.
Dear Maui, about this interesting place NZ, I would love to go there. But how can I get there? As I thought in my head. I asked one of my chiefs and told them, “I would like to go to NZ”. As I talked with pride. So they said, “Absolutely”. We got on a boat called a WAKA. I strolled through the sea and became all scared about this journey. I shivered in fear. Shock came up my body, but luckily we arrived to NZ. “This place is so amazing”. As I discourse to my companion.
So Maui, this is how I will feel if I set sail. Like I said before when I talked about on how I would feel setting sail, shivering in fear and shockness or adrenaline will go through my body.
I hope you enjoyed my splendid letter!!!
- Zephaniah
Kia ora Zephaniah, I really enjoyed reading your letter that your wrote to Maui. You had a good sense of humor in your Roam to New Zealand.The part I found funny was it was an amazing place, as I strolled through the sea. That part was hilarious because you can't stroll through the sea. You will sink and drown. And also as I'm about to finish my comment you miss spelled rome when it's spelled roam. Just a heads up there Zeph just in case you get heaps of comment saying "Zeph, you've miss spelled rome. it's spelled roam". LOL! Nah Just joking Zeph ; overall I enjoyed reading your work. Kind regards
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Kia Ora Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteI’m Dani, one of the other bloggers for the Kaikohekohe cluster with Georgia. It’s great to see that you started blogging yesterday.
I really like how you told Maui about your feelings and how you expressed those feelings by ‘shivering in fear’. I could really imagine how you felt on your scary voyage over to New Zealand. Did you hear about the expedition that happened a few years ago? A crew of 20 people sailed from New Zealand to Easter Island in traditional waka using only traditional navigation methods! Here is a link to an article about it if you wanted to read about it: http://www.radionz.co.nz/news/national/122364/new-zealand-waka-reach-easter-island.
I can’t wait to see more blogs from you!
-Dani