KIA-ORA EVERYONE, TODAY I HAVE CREATED A SHORT SUCCESSFUL POEM THAT I HAVE PERSONALLY WRIT-IN BY MYSELF, NO COPYING AND NO PASTING. I HAD A LOT OF FUN GIVING IT A GO SO I REALLY DO HOPE YOU ENJOY READY IT. ANYWAYS THAT IS IT FROM ME.
Well done, what an interesting poem! I never thought of the moon being heroic but that's the nice thing about poetry it gives freedom to your imagination. I remember when I was 5 my dad and I were watching our black and white TV, watching Neil Armstrong take his first step on the moon. We went outside and looked up at the moon, it was a memory that has stayed with me forever. Would you like to go to the moon if you could?
Kia-ora Kerry, I would like to thank for your awesome message, it is very much appreciated. What a memory you stated there, it sounds so memorable. And yes, I would indeed like to go to the moon if I could. Thank you -Zephaniah
Kia ora Zephaniah! I'm back! On the bright side, Auckland has beautiful weather! Granted the weather changes about every five minutes but here's the latest update! How's Northland going?
Thank you again for all your effort in this blog post! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem about being in space! You've very clearly described your experiences around bouncing on the moon! I also really like your presentation lay out - I think the grey and white and the bolded handwritten -style of letters make for a very fun post! Ka pai on all your hard work!
Hi Zephaniah
ReplyDeleteWell done, what an interesting poem! I never thought of the moon being heroic but that's the nice thing about poetry it gives freedom to your imagination.
I remember when I was 5 my dad and I were watching our black and white TV, watching Neil Armstrong take his first step on the moon. We went outside and looked up at the moon, it was a memory that has stayed with me forever. Would you like to go to the moon if you could?
Kia-ora Kerry, I would like to thank for your awesome message, it is very much appreciated. What a memory you stated there, it sounds so memorable. And yes, I would indeed like to go to the moon if I could.
DeleteThank you
-Zephaniah
Kia ora Zephaniah! I'm back! On the bright side, Auckland has beautiful weather! Granted the weather changes about every five minutes but here's the latest update! How's Northland going?
ReplyDeleteThank you again for all your effort in this blog post! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem about being in space! You've very clearly described your experiences around bouncing on the moon! I also really like your presentation lay out - I think the grey and white and the bolded handwritten -style of letters make for a very fun post! Ka pai on all your hard work!
Ngā mihi,
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