I think you've chosen a fantastic topic to write about in your letter to Jacinda. Plastic pollution is a very important issue that definitely deserves to be focused on, and hopefully prevented.
You've clearly done some awesome research about the topic, however I've noticed that a lot of your information has been taken from websites. In order to get points for this activity, you need to make sure the letter is in your own words.
You have some great information about plastic pollution already, so why don't you put that into your own words and try write your letter again, explaining why you have chosen this topic, and what you would like her to do about it, as the prime minister.
Kia ora Zephaniah,
ReplyDeleteI think you've chosen a fantastic topic to write about in your letter to Jacinda. Plastic pollution is a very important issue that definitely deserves to be focused on, and hopefully prevented.
You've clearly done some awesome research about the topic, however I've noticed that a lot of your information has been taken from websites. In order to get points for this activity, you need to make sure the letter is in your own words.
You have some great information about plastic pollution already, so why don't you put that into your own words and try write your letter again, explaining why you have chosen this topic, and what you would like her to do about it, as the prime minister.
I look forward to reading your work!
Tayla