Place Value Strategy.

Bok choy

This book is written by Paul Mason and the story is Bok Choy.

It is about a little boy named Jacob and a Chinese man Ah Sum. It is in Otago in a gold mining village in 1865.It is about Ah Sum saving Jacob when he was drowning.Ms Bishop was racist to A sum, Jacob and his mother were very nice to Ah Sum. But Jacob did not like Ah sum.Mrs bishop’s son name is william. He wasn't nice too. He was following his mother being racist. He was saying chinaman and tamping the carpet.

My favourite part is when Ah Sum saves Jacob.

Something that surprised me is when william is racist to A Sum.

Something I have learnt is commas and hard words.

Something interesting is when Jacob nearly drowned.

Whangarei Trip

Going to Whangarei.

On the holidays me and my family went to Whangarei. We went to go and get clothes shopping. And guess what? I got a tablet. I was so excited to go. “Yay, we arrived at Whangarei”. First we went to kmart to get clothes shopping. I got a pair of slippers, plus they looked warm. They were gray. And I got 4 thin t.shirt. They were cool but they weren't warm. And then I got a fluffy warm jacket it was blue and white. After that we went to harvey norman  to get our tablet. It was dark black. For lunch we had my favorite, Burger king. And then we went home again.

My next learning steps are

To know how to use a question mark and an exclamation mark correctly

To finish my writing with a reflection (what I thought about the experience)

To add more interesting language (adjectives, similes)

Here are my goals I am working towards