How Do You Write A Positive Comment?

In the afternoon we had to write a post of what we learnt today. Here's what I want to say about that.

Today Whaea Tania came into our classroom and taught us how to write a great and positive comment. So we watched a video about coloring someones else's canvas. After watching the video Whaea Tania got out some ice block sticks with all of the classrooms names on them. She put them in a kete and we were to pick one out. Who ever's names that were on the stick, we had to write a comment on there blog to color there canvas. So the person I wrote to was Iverson.

Here's what I wrote to Iverson:

Hi Iverson, it's Zephaniah here. I like the way how you explained what you did on learning how to code. One nice thing I heard in your post was that you helped others how to work and Finnish all the levels. I also like the way you screenshotted your certificate and a photo to show what you've been doing. Maybe next time you could add more sense to what your explaining in the text for example, the punctuation and putting it all together so it all can make sense well it's in one paragraph. But overall, great DLO on learning how to code. Blog You Later!

What I learnt today about coloring someone else's canvas, is that when commenting on someone else's blog, it will brighten there day by coloring there canvas. 

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