A Day At The Toy Factory

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A Day At The Toy Factory

On an early foggy Monday morning, I wearily rolled out of bed with a really dramatic face. It was not very exciting. I had to get out of bed about 2:00 am in the morning and get ready for work at the most exhausted place on earth, which is the factory. I had to make so many toys and I was really exhausted.

I arrived at the factory about 3:04. I thought that I was late. A few minutes later the buzzer went off and I went in the factory half asleep. The moment I walked in the door, half asleep, I see that everyone was already working. Again I thought “am I late or am I not”. I saw the boss coming and he said in a demanded way, “you're five minutes late!” I thought “oh oh, am I in trouble”. I stood there, frozen in fear. “I’m sorry”, I quiverd.

The working conditions are really dangerous. Not like I thought it will be. Sometimes I will get injured and sick from all the fumes. Tammy (my friend), learnt that it was not a very good place to work at. It was horrible.

I walked to my working station and began to work. Six hours later finally the buzzer went off and we had lunch. We had the most bitter and mushy yuck rice in the world. Well eating my bitter mushy rice I noticed someone almost fainting and getting dizzy. I quickly helped that person. After that the buzzer went off again and it was time to work.

Once I walked in there I felt hotness and all the fumes that were all in the factory, I smelt it and I was almost fainting. It felt like I was going to be sick as. I’m so offended when my body decides to be sick. So I went back to my station to work. When I helped that person, I didn't lay a hand on my food. I was so hungry. I had the most exhausted face and thought, “can this get any worse”. Well it did.

I worked for almost 14 hours, I was so exhausted. All the adults including me were so tired than a sloth. I had no energy. When I walked it felt like I was walking through a thick swamp. After that the buzzer finally went off to go back home. So I went back home and had a sleep for the next dramatic day. I asked myself, “will anything good happen in the next days?”. As I fell asleep.